Feedback Unit 4 – Interplay of Food and Body

Hello Sterling, 

 

I really enjoyed reading your post on female health in wellness for adults. I noticed that all your images had references which is very important when citing. I also enjoyed that you had subheadings and headings making it more organized for your readers. For example, you used the subheading body image and then you shared how body image impacts female during adulthood. I also enjoyed that you used a picture below to provide more visual information to your readers making it more easier to understanding how females are impacted. I also liked that you provided a table that shows exercises females may consider during their menstrual cycle. Your sentences were very logical and clear making it easy to follow along and understand the deeper meaning. I One suggestion would be to discuss in details some of the risk factors that adult women might face due to lack of self-esteem and poor body image. How do these risk factors impact female’s daily life choices? Can they still live a normal life in society? These are some of the questions I asked myself when reading that specific paragraph. I also noticed that you did not have a sentence describing each image. Adding 1-2 sentences regarding each image to help the readers understand why this image is important. The videos you shared were also very useful. For example, eating disorders and pregnancy was a great video that helped me understand how eating disorders can affect females. The video was very useful and provided more insight that helped me understand your content more. Overall great post! Thanks for sharing!